Sunday, September 21, 2014

Heartsing

(Because why have a blog if I can't put up random stuff I wrote? This is the first piece of fiction I have ever written that I am both happy with and that did not cause me acute pain. For this I am indebted to one Wulfpig whose writing class is unlike any other.)
 
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For Hobden,it was a day like every other day.
The forge by the ford in the Heartsing river was the same as ever, the smell of fire and horses and hot metal all pervasive in the June sunshine. The village was quiet in the mid-day heat, silent except for the sounds of contented livestock and the flow of water.

Business was slow. A few horseshoes, the odd armor repair for a wandering knight.
The small village barely supported its one smith, many people wondered why he remained at all. But Hobden's father had been a smith before him, and his father before him, as long as there had been a village there, and some men said as long as there had been a ford.

He looked out of his workshop, down the dusty, broad swathe of the main street, unable to shake the feeling that something was about to happen. The heat haze was making the false fronts of the few shops waver. Was it only the stillness of a midsummer noon that gave him the feeling that something dire was impending? His gaze wandered through the cluster of houses, past the steeple of the small church, following the road until it wound out of sight among the surrounding hills. There was nothing there, but he could not shake the feeling that he was waiting for something.

There was nothing there.

Nothing but a small cloud of dust. And a faint scream that was coming closer. And a larger cloud of dust behind that. A cloud of dust made by something unnaturally tall and broad, like a man but taller than any of the houses.

The small screaming dust cloud reached the far end of the village, identifiable now as one of the children who had been out watching the livestock. The townsfolk began to emerge from the shops and houses, wondering at first, then breaking into panic as they saw what was bearing down on them. Hobden could see the panic spreading toward him in waves. Everything on legs was running, trying to get away from the monster bearing down on them. Now he could see that it appeared to be an armored man. Only larger than any man could possibly be.

It was effortlessly, almost casually, wrecking everything in its path. First one house, then another was leveled; bludgeoned apart by the monster's metal fists. Fire ignited as more buildings were torn apart. Everyone was running.

Something snapped in Hobden's mind, and, hammer in hand, he began to run too.

Toward the giant.

It was a moment of blazing clarity.

This was what he had been waiting for.

Waiting his whole life.

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The story is that he ran up the side of a building, ran over the roofs and caromed off the church steeple before bringing down his hammer onto the giant's head in a blaze of lightning.

Whether the story is true, I cannot say. He appeared to have no memory of the incident when I spoke to him, years later. He only talked a little about his work, that business was bad, that the feeling had been growing on him lately that he was waiting for something.

What, he could not tell me.